This chapter was so sad it broke my heart. Tommy is so tied in a world where there is nothing left for him as his own. I mean even the wedding is out of his hand. Thinking of how I was preparing my own wedding makes me really sorry for him.
Amanda seems really cold in this chapter and I don't even want to start to write anything about her mother. What a heartless person!
Adam is hurting, Tommy is hurting, it's just too sad. I hope you can make it better?
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Date: 2011-11-16 01:34 pm (UTC)This chapter was so sad it broke my heart. Tommy is so tied in a world where there is nothing left for him as his own. I mean even the wedding is out of his hand. Thinking of how I was preparing my own wedding makes me really sorry for him.
Amanda seems really cold in this chapter and I don't even want to start to write anything about her mother. What a heartless person!
Adam is hurting, Tommy is hurting, it's just too sad. I hope you can make it better?
Really good chapter!