This was so heartbreaking!! Im always looking forward to the next chapters. I loved the 1st part of the chapter, I thought Kris asking Adam for a quickie was cute and I thought it was sweet that he banged on teh window to get Adam's attention when he was leaving.
I really love how you wrote Katy. IM glad she told Kris her opinion on what is going on. I agree with Katy, I feel like Brian is also maniuplating Kris abit. I also feel that Brians parents expect Kris to put everything on hold for Brian, I feel for them too, but I think they put pressure on Kris.
The last part of the chapter was heartbreaking and beautifully written. IM lookgn forward to teh next chapter!
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Date: 2011-08-10 10:40 pm (UTC)I really love how you wrote Katy. IM glad she told Kris her opinion on what is going on. I agree with Katy, I feel like Brian is also maniuplating Kris abit. I also feel that Brians parents expect Kris to put everything on hold for Brian, I feel for them too, but I think they put pressure on Kris.
The last part of the chapter was heartbreaking and beautifully written. IM lookgn forward to teh next chapter!